NYCMidnight started up their “Tweet Me a Story” contest again last night, and once again I’m taking a swing at it. Rules: entrants must write a 140-character-or-less story using the supplied word. Entrants had 5 hours to come up with up to three entries. My group’s word was BETTER. Here’s what I submitted, with titles added here for the fun of it:
Self-Improvement
“Dammit, could you be a better man just once in your life?”
“Oh, sure,” he laughed, lunging for her.
“Could you hurry?” she said, and fired.
Memories
From my blanket, I watched the surf. “It doesn’t get any better than this.”
From his time machine, me from 2023 sighed. “No, it doesn’t.”
Dying to Know
“That’s it, I have to know. You’ve been with me and with Mike. Which one is the better man?”
I smiled. “The one who didn’t have to ask.”
I’ll keep you posted on the results, because you know you’re desperate to know. And here’s one that didn’t make the cut:
Keeping Your Spirits Up
“Are you feeling better, hon?”
“A little.”
“Did the nap help?”
“No, but finding the poison you used on me and slipping it in your tea did.”
I really like the first one. A LOT. It’s powerful 🙂